Third Draft

Storyboard 3

1.) esbalishing shot of woods, with water in view
2.) abbie walks into shot, draging a big bag, it would look like a stuggle to carry it
3.) she drags the bag near the water and she look suspicious, close up of face.
4.) she kicks the bag into the water camera follows bag into the water.
5.) wide shot of abbie walking away from the bag

this would suugest that abbie has killed celaine and she is in the bag.

Script: for start

Abbie: you need to look after something for me

Celaine: were not friends anymore I don’t need to do this.

Abbie: yes you do. Ill have to kill you if you cant.

Celaine: (shakes head)

Abbie: take it.

Celaine: (takes the box, and walks away)

Storyboard for start of film

1.) it will fade to black from the opening sequence and then there will be an esballishing shot of a bench with “2 week earlier” written across the top.
2.)celaine will be sat on the bench already.
3.) it will then zoom into the bench as abbie will walk into the scene, she will sit down on the bench.
4.) a conversation will then start between the two about this box, how if she looses the box abbie will have to kill her. this is a hint to what will happen later in the film.
5.) the box will then be handed to celaine, close up of the box.
6.) celaine gets worried about what is in the box, but abbie just tells her to keep it and not loose it.
7.) celaine then walks away with the box, whilst abbie stays on the bench.

Feeback: Second draft

After showing people the second draft of our video, most of the feedback was positive however they suggested that we put the beginning of the film in there as well to set the story up as our opening sequence is more like a separate story.

We decided to do this so we planned what the rest of the film would be about so that we could write and opening to the film. We decided to keep it so that there was still some mystery to what the rest of the film is going to be about.